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Location: bangalore, karnataka, India

Sometimes editor, sometimes counsellor. Trying to find a way of life that makes some sense to me.

Thursday, April 20, 2006

I saw a river's birth and death

I saw a river's birth and death

I saw a river’s birth.
Glacial juggernaut melt,
Shedding unneeded girth
In unsullied mountain belt.

I saw a river grow.
Resilient bedrock cut,
By sprightly alpine flow
In bountiful deep earth gut.

I saw a river fall.
Coursing lifeblood stopped,
With choking concrete wall
The plain’s harmony robbed
In unending urban sprawl.

8 Comments:

Anonymous Anonymous said...

An extremely powerful rhyme scheme brother...

1:59 AM  
Blogger RTP said...

Thanks. Although it does need a little more work. But I still haven't developed the habit of going back and working on any of my poems.

8:47 AM  
Blogger Jugular Bean said...

Nice!

5:58 AM  
Blogger RTP said...

Thank you Bean. By the way what did I read in someone's comment about you quitting?

5:15 AM  
Blogger Avalonian said...

ah yes..urban angst in rural guise. Wondeful!

7:57 PM  
Anonymous Anonymous said...

Maybe its time for the birth of another blog...

2:47 AM  
Anonymous Anonymous said...

Ramble on hon...

8:57 PM  
Blogger nkshirsa said...

awesome !!

3:19 AM  

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