Relocation
Just started it... Nowhere near liking it yet. Must let this one percolate and grow. But it needs to be on paper and not in my head. So...
Relocation
The earliest I can remember
Is running hand in hand
From wall to wall,
So near they were then.
And you were young,
So young that nobody chided you
For the leaves and dirt in your hair
From lolling ambitionless in the sun.
Did we have to grow up, grow apart?
posted by RTP | 10:57 AM
4 Comments:
It's quite pretty as it is.
Well thank you... But the problem is that it's too generic now. That's why i dont like
yeah I do think it needs work as well. Generic is the right term for it. I'd love to see what it grows into.
Have been trying to rewrite it. The problem is that I heard Dylan's Shelter From the Storm right when I started working on it and those words are stuck in my head, interfering with my train of thought.
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